Material Out of Place

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Material Out of Place

Postby Rëndition » Tue May 15, 2012 7:00 pm

So was re-reading the books today and came across this that felt out of place, or a bit forced. I dunno, just didn't feel right.

"Of course they care." F'nor seemed almost angry that she'd doubt it. "No, I mean, they say they care." F'nor looked into her eyes, his embrace less fiercely possessive. "Yes, they're learning because they love."

I mean, I don't know but it just felt like she wrote that in to make the reader feel an emotion they were already feeling. Maybe I am the only one who felt that way.

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